aight easily this goes to memisis..i didnt feel theones verse that much at all.. was no structure lol.. no metas, no complexity at all... but keep tryin u bound to get better..

memisi ur verse was coo.. but the way it flowed mad it have alot a filler.. and ur verse structure needs some work on how its typed up and what not... makes it easier on the eyes =P.. and the lines were a bit stretched, but other than that, it was a nice lil verse.. big ups to both of you...

v/mem

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