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Old 06-25-04, 01:59 AM   #8
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deleon:

Your the worst clown, You'll get crushed in this 2nd round..
You dont have to run 10 yards to be the First-Down..
^^kinda weak but decent opener 5/10
Me winning is Clear CUT, Off with ya head.. get it ho?..
I'm going to have a few Al-Qaidas Direct this Video..
^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10
Nobodyz Seein Your Raps Thats why Im believing your wack..
Check the Brackets ..Your 3-1,ranked 21st and theres a reason for that..
^^another good punch and personal good shyt 8/10
Ill leave Dfrost runnin infact, Defeat me? your ass is stupid..
If Im the man to beat ur sure in hell not the man to do it..
^^hott bar 8/10
You cant help to admit.. that Im one hell of a spitter..
And dog you aint "SHIT" But your verses beg to differ..
^^good personal weak bar altogether 6/10
Ill leave you on the streets, Ya punches are not as hard as mines..
Ya lines aint workin, They should be written on cardboard signs..
^^good meta bad punch 6/10
Face it, take a look in the mirror and realize your not hot dude..
He leaves pauses for laughs after his lines..but the voters forgot too..
^^good punch decent bar 7/10
I dont know if I should like you or not, Ill say thanks for the bye..
But than again FUCK YOU.............For wasting my time..
^^decent closer not too hott 6/10

overall : 53/80

dfrost:

Time to elevate, find new techniques, read your sig, you proclaim rookie proudly
Found 8 different ways to say your shit is wack and the message still kinda cloudy
^^decent opener ok punch 7/10
You woulda got another award too, if deadly didn’t hate
Sure you coulda pulled it off, you was june’s best biter to date
^^kinda weak personal punch wasnt too hard 4/10
Kid is like lemon up, just a fuckin wannabe ‘sprite’
Wishes he was a ‘legend’ but he more of a Tyson who can’t fight
^^weak bar...bad punch but good meta 5/10
Rookie don’t understand ‘wordplay’, it something he ain’t yet ‘caught’
That’s why when I bust the sick shit he’s still ‘molestin thoughts’
^^decent bar not too hott either 5/10
People always hatin on newbs, strange cause you still a virgin to rap
We all knew it wasn’t your flow that made the booty go ………..
^^bad closer worst bar of battle 3/10

overall : 24/50

vote: deleon

dfrost your verse was consistent because it was consistently bad all the way thru pretty much...you had decent punches but none that hit that hard...no wordplay or good vocab your verse wasnt that good....deleon you had a better verse and had some good punches and decent personals...work on expanding your vocab and using harder punches

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