DON
structure was ok...u had some stretched lines though...flow was decent...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...most of ur punches connected...personals were alright...

Forgotten Flow
structure was aight...some of ur lines were stretched as well...flow was ok...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and basic...a few of ur punches connected...personals were good...

Overall
neither had a good structure...both had an ok flow...both had some metas...forgotten had more personals...don had better wordplay...as well as more of his punches connected...so basing off of that...don gets my vote...

VOTE - DON

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