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Old 06-25-04, 02:26 AM   #6
JPoll
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here is my honest breakdown...

first up is mixxed...

Yo im Infected wit Rap Skillz Thats what i Provide...
Ya Sig Sayin Gods Well for u to win you need Him on ya Side....
7.5 haha nice opener mixxed...good shit
If some one says ur a vet well they Lied....
when i came out ya hide,ran like a bitch to ya basement inside....
5 hmm not really worded well at all, just not really a good concept...
Weel 3-2 coming in atleast a Couple of wins....
Leave u DisFunctional and Froze like da Sims....
6.5 not bad...not bad...again work on your wording dude...
Well i Chould Tell why ya messed up goin 2 school wit Re-tarts....
The Only Way u get high on The Record is if u put weed on Charts....
5.5 didn't like this bar either...but this is probably one of the best drops ive read of yours...
Yo nigga im usein 10 lines u probley usin them all....
Spit Flowz n ma Punches so hard Leavein this FAke Fall....
6 decent...

you need to still work on wording, and having more meta's in your work...and having smarter punches...but good job man


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Kid's hooked on Buck cuz he wont ever make a dollar...
At least not for rapping, until he gives tutorials a holler...
7.5 good shit...solid and yet simple...
What the fuck was that verse, kid ya rushed it...
It was pure shit, thats why voters will flush it...
7.5 another nice bar...
Fuck you kid, thats a better punch than you have used...
I could post ur verse and use it as a punch against you...
8...see that's a nice bar right there...good job so far...
Not a need to try when i already merked this guy...
Didnt try either time, put it simply for him, BYE...
5 didn't like this bar very much..played...
Your out of the tourny, quit the league, elevate son...
Keystyled ya, merked him easily all for a little fun...
6.5 nicely done...you could tell you keystyled it quickly...but yes it was enough to win it...good shit...even though you could tell that you didn't really try your hardest...


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