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Old 06-25-04, 06:24 AM   #8
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Poison

Im annihilatin haters, between 'now an later'
addin this fag on tha list, cuz he sweeter than 'now-an-lators'


Didn't like this one actually

smirf you'll neva be hot, even if u lived in tha tropicals below tha equator
My favo line

u an talent don mix, like vampires an crosses very nice!

Stop impetously writin ya 'verses', its causing u 'losses'
Im usually not a kid that 'curses', but 'DAMN' u 'loss-this'


Liked the internal rhyme but the "losses" and "loss-this", don't like that

Young Smirf

and matter fact you a dick ridin' faggot who never held a gun/
look nigga you wouldn't be hard if you took viagra son/


My favo line

detroit still ain't shit nigga fuck the pistons
so take you sorry bitch ass to the fuckin' 8mile

Ya tried to play "Detroit" on him but if you wanna do this, at least do it good!Cuz these lines were wack, you could've played them much better

I have to go with Poison cuz his lines were better, the punches were good, vocab and flow 2...
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