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Old 06-25-04, 07:29 AM   #6
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accomplish ment is in my crew.. however im voting against him...
accomplishment
you didnt come hard at all, you used some shit lines such ass:
no chances the way this kids late we should up-the-stakes and
let this bitch feel what its like to have breath depravation
Bad opener^ your whole verse had choppy flow..
overall 6.4/10

valor....
you had bad structure good* flow
you used a bad line... however you flipped it and used good wordplay on
the second line:This Cats Gay Worry's More Of Having A Ja'rule Body..
He Thinks He's A Vet But Looses To Noobs Often,hows That Godly?.
^^ you put in that personal you came harder so in my book you won
ovrall.. 7.0/10
my vote valor for just coming harder and throwing muh more personals and punches
v/valor

accomplish ment is in my crew but im voing against him
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