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Old 06-25-04, 09:01 AM   #11
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for shadow:

flow:working alright some prety good internal rhymes at the start of it good job 7/10

volcab:alittle above basic but nothing to great 6/10

punches:some alright punches but mainly playd ideas like dick rider lines and shit try abit more on this part 5.5/10

overall:18.5/30

breakdown for ketch22:

flow:alittle sctreched on the bars some internal rhyming but not enough i felt 5.5/10

volcab:good use here no problems 6.5/10

punches:good lines better then your oppenent my fav,"You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**" good job here 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--ketch22
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league