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IP:
I peeped this at TRP. It was good but similar to what they said you all didnt focus on the same angle. This was dope tho my man and I particualr enjoyed your rhyme scheme
An deliberately easily fall victim like a fiend to the heat…
As my knees hit the cold concrete…I give-in in defeat…
“What do you want from me!” I turn to the streets an plead…
As my retreat’s complete…I face him an eye to eye we meet…
He speaks “Now Eleete, you really didn’t think you could escape the beat?”
as for word...
Paranoia sets in, I’m glancing over my shoulders,
The chill bumps grow colder
As my stepping stones are substitute with boulders.
^nice line
Forumlae was pretty dope too...
It’ll crawl in my head and die - just to punish me
Taunt my mind until I lose peace, need to refurnish B
Nourish me - Please - let me flourish and be free
This to me is definately collab of the month. Great work
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