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Banned: Spamming
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IP:
This was pretty good and it had sort of a comical feel with these lines...
"You might fool those ugly fat ass chicks but i'm smarter
If you want me,stop playing tricks,gotta work harder"
flow was good...on point. Vocab was nice, the only thing I could suggest to make this piece better would be to either do more internal rhymes or more multies.
Good work
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