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Old 06-25-04, 11:51 AM   #14
white-ice
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first off.great verses by both........

t-storm...wordplay 9/10
structure 8/10
imagery 9/10
flow 7.5/10
enjoyment 8.5/10
overall-42/50- very nice piece...flow cud be beta..apart from that great imagery and wordplay

flow-wordplay 8/10
structure 8/10
imagery 8/10
flow 8.5/10
enjoyment 8/10
overall-40.5 /10-very strong verse,u had bit beta flow,but i felt t`s a bit more,overall t gets my vote 4 more creativity/imagery