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Old 06-25-04, 11:54 AM   #13
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first off the batt, atticus he already had that legless track runner thang in there... you prolly shoulda used somethin else... it was a nice bar, but still thats kinda feeding..

atticus ur verse really didnt have ne flow at all... your punches were like sentences, you need to chop that shit down a smidgen or focus on matching sylables or somethin :P...

ill tempa i felt like your punches were real simple typed ones.. but i liked that ruler one, even tho it was a joke before it was a punch :P.. i believe atticus got this due to his punches... they hit a bit harder.. except for that fed line :P, that almost lost my decision lol..

v/Atticus
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