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Old 06-25-04, 12:15 PM   #10
Ca'lam
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thug matrix.. dont post if you cant vote, freepostin for no reasons annoying...k now...

metahpore didnt really have one punch that lnaded hard... and his flow was kina off... the words he used to rhyme stuff i didnt like em that much...you just talked about what you gonna do to him, but didnt do it na mean? you need to work on cuttin out that filler some, and get ot the punches and start swinging..

riffraff - your strongest punch was that cat line.. was original.. but besides that line, your other punches werent really stickin... your flow was pretty good.. last line tho was shaky.. didnt really feel the nuterd line.. should have used some punch using future or something.. at least thats what i would have done..

v/raff got this is every catagory pretty much.. good battle both of you
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