..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: AAF4 20CB
10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"
nice open 9/10
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse
consitant verse nice 9/10
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat
Nice closer 8.4/10
You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.
nice vocab 8.2/10
I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****
kinda weak 7/10
As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******
not the best 8/10
winner-shadow
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