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Old 06-25-04, 12:31 PM   #12
PoLiFicK
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10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"

nice open 9/10

has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse

consitant verse nice 9/10

do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat

Nice closer 8.4/10

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.

nice vocab 8.2/10

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****

kinda weak 7/10

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******

not the best 8/10

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