Poison
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though....flow fell off a lil because of the stretched lines....u had some metas...wordplay was pretty tight...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Young Smirf
structure was ok...ur lines were uneven as hell...flow fell off because ur lines were goin everywhere...metas were pretty good...wordplay was decent....a few of ur punches connected...personals were also decent...

Overall
both had decent personals...as well as metas....neither had a good structure....and neither had a good flow....poison had better wordplay and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...poison gets my vote...

VOTE - POISON

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