ya'll came wit some shit that some of it didn't even rhyme
just get up out of this place/ rhyme pays, but your not about to get paid/
you couldn't sell a record if it came with a sac of weed/
this and
lay you flat on your back and put my foot on your chest/
coz even if yo ass couldn't hear, you still wouldn't be "def" (deaf)/
only actual things i saw good and they was both from one cat so he wins, but see shit dont really even rhyme, put ya rhymes at the end of each line and make bars without(/) in 'em, both need to elevate, but on da right track wit them two lines there playa,
vote up on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131384

and whitey kid hit my battle up too, and i'll hit ya's up if ya drop a link in it. one

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