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damn this was a pretty tight battle from both but overall i gotta give this one to immortal
immortal
damn son you had an iight verse but ive seen you do alot better
punhclines were iight but ive seen better....presonals were good and they were really making there mark...multies were pretty tight ....structure was good and it was almost a tie.. till ha rockin' a eminem picture in your lousy version of a sig on Rapbattles...
you can make some popcorn and your verse still wouldn't even crackle..... Lol that shyt mad me laught...overall nice verse and you won this battle
verdict
nice verse son i didnt expected alot coming from you but your really surprised me ....
multies were alittl off..structure was alittle off to with those ] i really dont like that...
punchlines were pretty decent...personals were aswell decent ..but overall you didnt have enought to merk immortal and fror that my vote goes to immortal but good battle adn keep elevating
vote immortal_soulja04
please return the favor in the battle in my sig thank you
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