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Old 06-25-04, 10:46 PM   #22
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damn son you had an iight verse but ive seen you do alot better
punhclines were iight but ive seen better....presonals were good and they were really making there mark...multies were pretty tight ....structure was way off thats something you really need to elevate alot on.......overall nice verse and you won this battle

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nice verse son i didnt expected alot coming from you but your really surprised me ....
multies were alittl off..structure was wack as fuk man this isnt a topical peice... i really dont like that...punchlines were pretty decent...personals were aswell decent ..but overall you didnt have enought to merk real and fror that my vote goes to real but good battle adn keep elevating

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