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Old 06-25-04, 11:07 PM   #16
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lol.. damn aka merked truth aka....

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nice punchlines ... nice flow.... you had some nice personal's going into your rhyme....
i really enjoyed reading your verse.. and you really merked this cat there nothing more i can say favirote line was"You talking to your crew like "Im Battling A.K.A."they all like you can't handle that//Cause even the hobo on the corner no that i carrie the gat//...lol... and another thing try to stop with the // and start with ....iigiht

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damn son your shyt was wack im sorry to say... you really need to elevate alot.. and work on your flow.. punchlines were decent...personls were iight but i wasnt really feelin any of em'..and you also need to work on your structure....

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