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Old 06-25-04, 11:18 PM   #13
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10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes" ok....
he says he is a "good mc'ee".... he's even swears its the truth
if it wasnt 4 his dickriders he woulda been murderd by a newb! doesnt rhyme
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse ok...decent multie
ur rhymes arent "cutting the cake" ..u must b losing ur footing
ur rhymes are "full-of-shit".. and the "proof is in the pudding" nice wordplay
please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried" nice.....
ur "shit-verse" needs to be submited to a toilet. it "just reeks" played as fuck
like a dinosaur.. after i kill him the wack mc'ees will b extinct
the only time this bitch "drops-hott-shit" is from his "bowel"
cant handle the fact that he's wack.......just throw in the towel!! same played stuff
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat nice closer....its decent
decent verse...not many multies or hard wordplay....you could have flowed better....but it seems like your losing your touch man.

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision. better than his opener

u set the wheels in motion, hope u can stop-what-u-started,
dude it Ain’t who's droppin first, its who droppin-the-hardest. ok...

Since u wanna sin, got metaphors, multies & Spits-u’ll-Covet,
2 things you cant stop, my Natural Vigor & the initials-of-it.* nice...but man relate to shit that all audience knos i kno stephen kings a famous author but i doubt everyone here knos about him

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.**** good attempt but not feeling it

Just like you name punk, ya Scripts, they got-no-substance,****
& Its ironic, cuz I’m hittin you, but Im takin shots-at-nothin. weak

You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**
Came ta R.B.ta be an mc but you shoulda stayed-in-the-band.***weak...i see what ur trying to do....but again relate to shit ppl kno

got Talons in spades, be afraid of what Sprayed-out-of-the-mouth,***
but then again friend, ya used ta bein layed-out-on-the-ground.*****mad weak

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******nice flow

k I give this to SHADOW cause he was more consistent with his lines and personals, but ketch fell off at the end. ketch´s opener and closer were the only tight stuff. overall, i think both of you coulda done much better. peac.e.....


not tryin to insult anyones intelligence w/explanation...
just wanna make sure ya feelin me..1

* N.V. = Envy
** stephin king wrote a book called IT
*** he says he lives in lincoln park in his profile.
**** shadows name plays
*****I jus got Accepted to A.I. his Crew
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