damn we got some trouble.....
that was a terrrible battle.. and my main problem was your newbish structure....
both of you.. sure Gdos son is new but you all need to elevate... hopefully you will


but anyway...

godson
ur lines were horribly strecthed and this really fucked ur structure to hell....
your punchlines were connecting like a blind boxer( sparcley )
your actually lucky u had one good punchline...
but

Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//
never use that line or anything like it again it was wack

overall *3*


rising

u had strecthed lines to ya vers ewas on the verdge of being wack..
to mee this battle was on sided... you won becuz of just harder
hitting punches... witch still hit weak.. u cannot do this against an experienced batteler
and when i say this im only saying this to help ya not offend ya...
overall *5.6*

my vote obviously rising sun for just better punches alone
with out this u woulndt ahve won

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