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this battle was pretty good but rising sun won this one real quick
gods son your lines were way to stretched and they werent really working for me..
punchlines were iight but some of them didnt really make that much sense...personals were really good and thats basically all you had.....your flow was way off it sorta changed in the middle so i wonder.....but overall your verse was iight but your structure was way off and you really need to work on that...
rising sun... damn son you had a nice verse .. you had some nice punchlines .. you had okay personals but they werent really that good...mutlies were decent..flow was really good and it was really merking god's son....overall you had a nice verse and this is the reason why you won good battle
Vote=Rising sun
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