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Old 06-25-04, 11:58 PM   #14
PoLiFicK
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ok wiinner rise by far way better drop

Open-

Your polluting this industry like SUVs
It’s best-you-leave cause your identity’s-deceived

nice 8/10

consitant verse

To beat me, you need a miracle bigger than your resurrection
Get to my recollection, many differences as you cannot get-affection


nice 8.6/10

closer

Giving me a loss for a no show, prophets aren’t down-with-that
If Jesus ever rapped, I hope that he would never sound-this-bad

overall 8.1/10

God

open



Rising SON..i got shocking news for you..all this time i've been your daddy//
Scored a one in hole (my dick) or hole in one...bitch i'm the golfer, you my fuckin caddy//

weak 7/10

consitant verse-u had none

closer

Now the times are being rearranged and changed its time to make room for The Vet
Its over cant you see that you lost and this Suns about to set??//

lame

overall 7/10

winner-rising sun
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