aight to the femcee u need a lota work on rhyming ur verse didnt work out wit that at all and the punches were kinda weak and u needed more personals that were strong.gods son nice verse it was funny specially the opener nice rhyming it was really good u had good personals specially bout her bein a femcee and some good punches in there it all sounded fresh and good os u get my vote

v/gods son