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Old 06-26-04, 02:18 AM   #17
Ca'lam
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wow.. she came pretty hard on that second verse.. to me fem won.. when i read all those verses, her second verse stands out...

first verse:
flow:nov
punches:fem
structure:nov by a bit

second verse:
flow:nove
punches:she had some pretty nice punches in there man....
structure:nov

.. it seemed like wills good structure and flow werent enuff to take this battle..her punches stood out more then both of those..really good battle both of you..


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