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Old 06-26-04, 03:09 AM   #27
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rated: nnot too hott of a verse but it was decent...good personal...and a couple good punches i liked the one about toy story and the beans one lmao @ that....rush your verse was really bad i think like your rhyme scheme and a couple lines didnt even rhyme which made it lose its impact...i think u need to elevate in alot of areas because that verse was a disspaointment...rated you need to elevate in harder punches and better wordplay/multies and your verses will start getting better and better

rated: 7/10

rush: 5.5/10

vote: rated

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