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Old 06-26-04, 05:13 AM   #6
Tempa
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Yo dynamic, yo verse was iight. But you only had one good punch. Some of yo shit was predictable. Decent structure. Ill wit it yo verse was ok but dynamic was a lil better. This is a battle you supposed to clown on him and hit em wit punch lines but u was just talkin mostly bout his girl. And ya structure was messed up. It was kinda hard to follow. Good future luck to both of ya. Vote - Bcdynamic
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