"Safe" .. Playa!!!!!!!!!!!!! .. Lmfao!!!!


- Aiight This Is Constructive Critisism' .. Nothing Disrespectful Or Anything Like That.. First Off Your Structure Was Off Balance Witch Threw Your Whole Flow Off Balance..!! Lines Were Uneven..Some Lines Were Filler Others Were Not...!!!!!!! Elevate.. You Have Potential Kiid' ..!! Just Work At What You Do...!! And You Will Gradually, Slightly Get Better At Wha Chu Trynna Do!!!!!!!!!!

-I Do Thank You For Taking The Time Of Day To Write This Verse Out To Me Though... Much Appriciated...!!!!!!

But Checck It ..!!

Checckity Checck Checkk..!! (Here's A Lil Summin Summin Nothing To Personal) BabyBoi!!!


Verse:

This site is a chatroom thanks to Maki lyrical,
Obvious lonely bastard who jerks off in the urinals,
You silly hoe you blow your lips are for dicks,
Battling DML was the closest contact you had with a chick,
You lost more your than seses, ignored the www.rapbattles.com census,
Your fashion scored big and was look upon offensive,
Immense brain damage makes your style comprehensive,
Don't take it as a 'Diss' you're retarded and i'm being pensive,

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DML - DangerousMyndLunatic!!!

You're Salt only good fot target practice..!!!! -

Wun Luv
~Lil Swirl~

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