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Old 06-26-04, 05:03 PM   #13
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E-Dubz - Good verse. Good lyrics, structure and punches. Opening wasn't bad. Last two lines weren't very good for a closer but it was a hot bar.

State Capitol - Last line was nice. Good verse just as e-dubz. Lyrics, structure and punches.

But i'm goin wit dubz on this cuz he was just a little ahead of you lyrically.
Vote - E-Dubz

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