olkingkole
structure was good...flow was on target...no metas...wordplay was decent...none of ur punches connected...no personals...

pictureperfect2
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little due the some of the stretchness...a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no personals..

Overall
olkingkole had the better structure...as well as the better flow...neither had personals...pictureperfect had better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...and knowing punches and wordplay r more important to have then structure and flow...pictureperfect gets my vote...

VOTE - PICTUREPERFECT2