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Old 06-26-04, 10:00 PM   #8
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mixtape:

Lets have this nigga try, then I'll rip him a new hide…
Skills? he fails to deliver like chicks with their tubes tied…
^^hottest opener i seen in a while 9/10
Lyrical rapture, captures souls, you'll need an overcoat to mask the holes…
That I leave when I breath venom till both your lung sacks corrode…
^^good vocab and wordplay nice meta good punch 8/10
Your messing with a deranged demon…
I aim to please man, My textuals Vicious, can you blame me for beatin…
^^lol good bar not too hott 6/10
This nobody who'll remain bleedin even when the worlds change seasons…
You shouldn't even be a emcee, I stand up for what I believe in…
You just stay seated bitch and stand up only when I'm leaving…
^^filler 4/10
Martial artist about to throw a kick to show this bitch who's ownin this…
I'll destroy your skeleton, and still fucking have a bone to pick…
^^hott meta good punch 9/10
Faggot needs to be side drop kicked, collide on the point of a high obelisk…
Strip your sockets, place your iris on my papyrus since you can't keep your eyes off it…
^^that really hott nice shyt 9/10
I spit vicious to this bitch to show him who's hotter…
You say I bore you. Fine, your just admitting i'm your true father…
^^good meta decent punch 7/10
Next time you call out a good rookie, remember I torched your face right…
^^think you forgot a line..2/10

overall : 54/80

spitaflame:

Ya 6 n 1 so ya good but i think your records liein,
The only Mixtape you got is the one that you buyin//
^^good meta and personal nice punch...(leave the // out) 7/10
Ya ass coudln't spit sick unless ya had a disease,
And im real sorry Mixtape but id prefer CD's//
^^decent meta and punch 6/10
Come to ya house beat ya n bring ya neighbors out,
I got so many sheets of lyrics you think i gots a paper route//
^^hott shyt good meta 8/10
I see you was the rookie of the month in June,
Thats cause i just got here and the months over soon//
^^decent personal weak punch 5/10
I get Pages of votes you would think i owned beepers,
All ya raps sound bad like music on blown speakers//
^^seen stuff similar to your 2nd line played 5/10
Your punches hit me softer then a Cotton Fluff,
You settin down the mic is the only time i see you Droppin Stuff//
^^seen stuff similar to this too...played 5/10
You hit me with weaker shit then a runner after da 24 K,
People say my shits straight or its just Yours is gay//
^^kinda weak not too hott 5/10
ITs like im on the Sears tower cause when i drop its scary,
I dont got guns cause the only thing i pop is cherries//
^^lol hott shyt but filler 5/10
Ima brick wall to punches so i Stop ya Danger,
And the only thing you got Hot is ya Anger//
^^decent punch good structure 7/10
You wanna win im the King and my Throne Forbids,
Now i know why they call you MixTape cause i own you kid//
^^decent closer nott too hott 6/10

overall : 59/100

vote: mixtape...i liked your punches spitaflame but alot of them were played or basic so you lost alot of points because of that...good verse tho just lose the filler and played punches and your verses would be str8 fire

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