alright check this

duece: ur shit was good i liked ur personals..and ur punches were ok...your flow was good..but ur structure needs work on...PM me and i can help u..or if u have msn or aim..good job

AKA: not that good..it was aiight....but u lacked personals..and ur punches werent that good...ur flow and structure was good..but thaz about it...good try thouigh

vote: the deuce

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