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Old 06-27-04, 02:11 AM   #5
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a.k.a- yo shit needs improvement.........i didnt see any punches that stand out to me. you didnt use any good vocab or no multis really.

Duece- yo i think your verse was betta......didnt really have any punches either but you did betta on personals.....overall elevate though.

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