The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
Haha- This was good- right to the point- you were able to say alot there... good job
Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
I understand where you wanted to go here, but this is why Ima vote against you---
the rhyme is way to basic... if spit out loud the rhyme is real choppy- if lookin at your opponents- it flows well and has a three syllable rhyme.... I understand this was sposed to be a personal diss also- Just not a great one in my opinion- Vote Spul.
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