bcdynamic
ur structure is wack .....your lines were way to simple.... but then to the end some where stretched......flow was wack becuase of you with the stretched and simple lines....wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches hitt not many...no personals...

NightVision
structure was good...your flow was decent...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches hit hard...there were no personals to be honest

Overall
vote nightvision

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