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siccwitit your verse was pretty weak...bars were stretched and forced...w/p wasnt hott hardly any multies...punches were mediocre and the flow was inconsistent you need to elevate alot...you had some played lines and some really weak lines nothing was interesting in your verse
overall:2/10
doubleedge you probably won this batle with just your opener it was kinda basic but still decent and a good punch your verse was consistent and had a nice flow structure was nice...you had a couple good multies...vocab is bad need to elevate on that...wordplay was decent once again pretty basic...and your closer was played...
overall: 6/10
vote:doubleedge
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