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Old 06-27-04, 05:22 AM   #7
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From: ztpirkS luoS kcuF
A.K.A. .:vs:. servin them up

IP:

servin them up- not a very good verse. you need to set it up a bit first
not bad rhyming tho...

A.K.A.- nice verse... well structured... nice flow... good punches
nice opener nd closer... that's it

vote- A.K.A.
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