c.m.f.s:
nerves couldn't spit shit even if he deserved it
got the urge to throw verses but his nerves wont give the surges
^^2nd line stretched decent opener 5/10
perves on girls coz when he get real one he hurls
regurges herbs from the guy he just gave head to on the curb
^^stretched and forced weak punch 3/10
he slurs a turd on the ground and says dinners served
rewords a verb to sound a way it's never been heard
^^filler and weak 4/10
rehearses the words from the hospital bed with his nurse
to hurt to reverse what's been lyrically said in his last curse
^^good w/p bad punch 6/10
mutha fuckers be callin ya clinically dead when ya pass words
way ya talkin like ya instantly bread a wack nerd
^^weak closer good w/p 5/10
overall : 23/50 (46%)
nervez:
Now here is a new bitch thats tryin to test my NERVEZ]
His name says it all C.ant M.ake F.emales S.quirt]
^^good personal and punch 7/10
Hes a failure,a coward, and his flows have no style]
So i beat this bitch down like a red headed step child]
^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10
He claims to be a killa, but in his soul is a HOMO]
Battle me you comin up short like asians in black PORNOs]
^^decent meta good punch 6/10
So as this bitch spits a line nuthin but utter dissapointment]
It just wasnt meant to be like MIKE fukin wit Macullay Culkin]
^^kinda weak 4/10
This hoe buckles under pressure like a one leggd weight lifter]
C.M.F.S. is a wasted product like rollin Bammer up in a swisher]
^^weak also 4/10
overall : 28/50 (56%)
vote: nervez
was a pretty clos battle but nervez won that fair
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