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Old 06-27-04, 09:43 AM   #11
ecueD
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this was a sic battle yall

Lil scrappy these were ur best lines

My spitts is lethal yours is just a little short of reachn elementary/
And your rhyme schemes clash, while all mines is all complimentary/
Walkn Around in RB, “ima good lyriciest” But you aint foolin no1 dude/
You as White as Casper and ya rhymes be just as see through/
And wuts up wit ya name BOI? You aint tha damn State Capital/
Planning on gettn payd for ya rhymeZ? Expect to be in DC, sleepn in front of tha church chapel/

u had some good hard punches in there but one thing i didnt like-- the flow with the... and ? it was sorta difficult to read

State-
Yo best lines

This Kids Shit...This Bitch Is Fake Like Pamela Anderson's Tits...
Kids Like a Clone, Both His Lyrics And His Name Are Bit.....
Rip Out Your Verses Spinal Chord So Your Rap Folds......
Im Spittin Flames...Like Andre 3000 Your Shit is "ICE COLD".....
Im easily Slippin right passed you like a hug from an anerexic chick.....
You Inches Short...your brain is about as big as your dick....
My lead stands 12 ft tall, Droppin Hard on this kid like Waterfalls.....
Came in Walkin, after this battle you gon' have to crawl....

i saw sum solid perosnals in there, nice strucutre and excellent flow

i liked this battle and its a tough choice but ima go wit State for personals and flow

v/state


P.S BOTH OF YOU PLEASE RETURN FAVOR IN MY SIG. STATE UR VOTE GOT REMOVED SO CUD U VOTE CORRECTLY AND DO IT AGAIN. THANKS!
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