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Old 06-27-04, 10:07 AM   #2
MrChu
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Nice flow but too much stuff didn't make sense

e.g ur a "44 mag killer"...but u only shoot at long range...(u snipe ppl with a mag?)
but then u dont have to use a glock (or magnum) coz u use a chain saw..(not long range)...

"like a hex sneek up on u and break your neck...so rejects i dont have to use tha fuckin tech's" contradicts it again...you also cursin every other line to keep the rhyming scheme goin...

"my shit make u go oh like some bad breath~" - is that a self diss?

"we make it seem like shit is fuckin digital~
even though it's only nuttin but fuckin text~"

don't make sense...it is digital, you just typed it.
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