Originally Posted by Mimesis

bcdynamic
y do i even take the time to tell u whats wrong with ur verse if u never make an attempt to change anything...ur structure is wack again...some of ur lines were to simple, some were stretched to no end...flow fell off due the the structure wackness...no metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...no personals...

NightVision
structure was good...flow was on target...no metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no personals...

Overall
both had ok wordplay...neither had metas...neither had personals...nightvision had the better structure...the better flow...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...nightvision gets my vote...

VOTE - NIGHTVISION