Thread: Big Bad Wolf VS. da pimp
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Old 06-27-04, 11:35 AM   #16
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweeza
Whew....Where to start?

Both of ya'll need to elevate, seriously. Punchlines are weak. Work on your structures.

Pimp:

You need to learn how to rhyme and work on your structure.
Overall: 3/10

Big Bad Wolf:

Your verses were okay, not the greatest i've seen from you, you can do better than that.
Overall:6/10

Vote: BBW


Quote:
^^^im goin' to have to agree on that cuz Pimp you need to fix your structure was line the shit up don't type it like u typin a paragraph 'n' shit...BBW..yo verses was ok..yo punches could have been a little bit harder..& yo structure was aight...keep elevating..my vote goes to BiG BaD WoLF...{peace}


Manyall need a lesson fo reel man Elevate fa reel this was jus horrendous

My v/ bbd
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