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Old 06-27-04, 12:27 PM   #18
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If thats what you thought
 
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From: I.Q. of a Genius
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METAPHOR: FLOW WAS okay. no need to explain punches, and structure was fair. I seen a personal in there too. note: come with punches that will stick and make a dude be like damn.

RiffRaff: You had betta flow, and better structure, You came equipped with stronger punches especially that line where you were talking about he too light for you....keep it cuz i see potential.

v/riffraff....ps. return the favor and place a vote to this battle in my sig
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