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Old 06-27-04, 01:10 PM   #10
Decree Wun
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hmm

yung tech: bad structure...make ur lines longer..but good punches and personals....good flow...bad vocab...u did pretty good...keep elevatin

blaq inq....hmm..ur shit was aiight u shuld of worded things differently n u had bad flow n structure..n ok punches n personals..vote tek
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