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Old 06-27-04, 01:28 PM   #7
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2fly:
cant stop me when om on like this so dont reply just log off/
punches hit you so hard till your head falls off/
holla at me when your in hell say it loud so i can here you in heaven/
leave your body so bloody your death was more aknowledged than 9-11/

Hard line about 9-11, but yo structure is a bit off wit the first bar... koo shit tho
Whitey:
thats weird dont that remind you of you own mom
your a poser, a guy that cant do anything but drop the n-bomb
now dont get me wrong but your flows aint strong
come over to my house and youll see your mom in a thong

THis was all well and funny about his mom but i think you could've come up wit some harder shit and you said nigga more than he did...

These were 2 koo verses for new cats but get a bit more complex next time, use vocabulary...but 2fly gets my votes cuz his shit was harder... Keep it up both of you
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