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Old 06-27-04, 01:44 PM   #11
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seventhird: i was feelin your verse it flowed together reall good...was pretty consistent and nice structure...some really good punches and a good personal also...i think you coulda came harder with the punches but they were decent and hard enough for you too win this battle:

overall : 7.5/10

body count: your verse wasnt that bad but it wasnt that good either it was mediocre...some good punches some weak punches flow was consistent for the most part....structure was decent only choppy in one place...you also coulda used harder punches and more multies wordplay and multies woulda made your verse hotter

overall: 6.5/10

vote: seventhird

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