Pretty decent. The only problem I had was that the flow was off at spots... the first couple lines... and then this:

"I met this Pablo, a dirty Spaniard; he is just like me but a rip off,
And we will see if his sex is better, when I cut his freakin dick off."

Not to mention that the vocab use here kinda kills it. However, it was much better towards the end. I guess work on your vocab and your flow a bit, and keep dropping.

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