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Old 06-27-04, 02:24 PM   #14
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picture: wtffffffff heyll naww that shit didnt even rhyme...good personals...bad structure ok flow...bad punches...wtf mayn lol...ok vocab..no multi's

ol king : good creativitie good punches good personals....didnt see any multi's....ur flow was good and ur structure was aiight...but at the end of each line put .... try it...u'll get good structure....good battle

vote: OLKING

i aint gon poll vote this until yall vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131972
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