state capitol: you had a hott verse it was pretty consistent all the way through....almost perfect structure i liked the rhyme scheme...punches were nice...not many hard ones but harder than gods son's punches...you definately took this battle tho with your finsisher probably harder than his whole verse...good multies and wordplay also

overall: 8/10

gods son there was no way you was gonna win with that verse punches were forced lines were stretched some punches were good others were either weak or played your structure was really bad and you should sorthen your lines some...the long lines isnt looking good...decent punches multies was str8 and so was wordplay flow was pretty consistent

overall :6/10

vote: state capitol

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