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Old 06-27-04, 09:15 PM   #16
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verdict:

i spit tha flow's that infect your body make your head shudda]
dump your body in tha ditch that's tha only time u bein gutter]
^^hott opener your best bar good meta 8/10
the only fuckin time u drop hot shit is when u have diarea]
poison u wit beano and make u shit nonstop for a fuckin year]
^^doesnt rhyme i have no tolerance for non rhyming words 1/10
take this so called rapper through a fuckin death portal]
that's the only time this souljah is bein fuckin immortal]
^^kinda weak closer...3/10

overall: 12/30

oh my fuckin' god warn the jury the verdict final just got declared...
he can't see my rhymes beat him cuz this nucca is visually impaired..
^^kinda weak good meta decent opener 6/10
dis cat probably burn CD's for a living from negro but without the g...
you can't win this you was produced from a herb on a damn tree...
^^even with the explanation this was wack 4/10
ha rockin' a eminem picture in your lousy version of a sig on Rapbattles...
you can make some popcorn and your verse still wouldn't even crackle.....
^^good meta hott bar nice punch 7/10

overall: 17/30

vote: immortal_souljah04

verdict dont say fucking so much in your verse it really makes you look weak...your verse wasnt hot at all elevate in all areas

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